So, have YOU written a short screenplay and would like some feedback about your protagonist? If so, you are in the right place. Everyone knows that in order to be memorable, a story needs a main character with enough "meat" to carry the audience through the narrative. That seems to be what a lot of movies today are trading for cool special effects. The result feels more like a video game, doesn't it? More on https://www.fiverr.com/s/511ur6
If anyone is looking for a good movie with a memorable main character: "The Imitation Game" -- based on true events during WW2 and following the main code breaker who helped win the war for Britain, Alan Turing. I saw it at a critics screening -- but I think it's now in movie houses. Magnificent script built around a smug math genius who is brilliant, though unsociable and unlikeable, and you'll root for Alan Turing all the same!