Screenwriting : "ARK" by Aaron Wroblewski by Aaron Wroblewski

Aaron Wroblewski

"ARK" by Aaron Wroblewski

My first logline :) hoping to add more in the near future.

Jason Dennis

I've seen you on some contest lists. I have a sci-fi script, let me know if you'd be interested in trading feedback. I'll post the logline to my profile here later tonight. (Note I would need the feedback quickly if possible, I am working to deadlines on the 17th and 20th - I can get your feedback quickly, as in by the 16th at least, and probably the next day)

Aaron Wroblewski

Hi Jason, yeah I've been in a few contests (just beginning my career in writing), nice to be noticed :) Sadly I'm working nights at the moment and the earliest I could read yours would be 13th Wednesday (and just coming off 12hr nights, might take me a day/or 2 to read) but am willing if you need help. There's no rush in my feedback :) I know my script is a long one, trying to re-write it but proving vastly difficult.... just doesn't have the same feel to it... but I may be slightly bias. Let me know if you need me to look it over.

Jason Dennis

Okay, I'll read yours first and get back to you. I'm going to go all the way to the 20th on that deadline, but the one on the 17th has a really short turnaround (festival) and I want to get it in. I was going to today but encountered a delay. You reading it starting the 13th is fine for the 20th or any later contest.

Aaron Wroblewski

Ok, as long as it doesn't affect your schedule. Will try and get the feedback to you asap :)

Jason Dennis

I've downloaded it. I'll give you some notes. Send me your email, I'll attach my script and the notes on yours.

Aaron Wroblewski

I charge 15% fee... lol :) joking. I've messaged you my email, send whenever you can mate :)

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