I posted a script. Any and all constructive critique is welcome. Thanks. https://www.stage32.com/profile/191865/Screenplay/Davids-War
Screenwriting : Seeking feedback by Pablo A. Rajczyk
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Hi Pablo, I took a quick look. The first page is pretty dense and confusing as a read, not the best way to draw a reader in. You need to pare back the description and use the least amount of words to paint the clearest picture. Kind Regards, Eoin