Introduce Yourself : Hello by Christine Villarreal

My name is Hazeal Cain-I'm new to the group and very new to screen writing-im currently halfway through my first script--#THESACRIFICE-its about a young man ( Dillion)- with a broken past-his addiction of heroin has carried him through the torments of life, including the suicide of his father (which happened in front of him)- the only love he has ever known was her....Mary Jane-shes always loved him unconditionally without judgements-together they have a son named chase who idolizes his father-Dillion is out of work and desperately seeking a new beginning- especially after being informed he has another child on the way-...with the odds against him-he begins to seek employment but what he finds instead will change his life forever!!--- THE SACRIFICE- any and all advice would be greatly appreciated on pitching- writing methods-or anything helpful that would manifest the script -thank you and have a blessed day!!