Your Stage : Longline review request by Mark Mantastic

I am new to writing and finished the treatment on my first project. However, all the people who have read it are friends and family. We know, they all lie or at least tell you things to spare your feelings. I need real feedback on the treatment and logline. So I am hoping by posting the logline here I will get some comments on it and maybe someone will even be willing to read the treatment and give me real feedback. Logline ON AIR takes a look at the antics and drama that occurs behind the mic at a heritage radio station in a top 20 market. These 8 employees have to adapt after the sale of their “mom and pop” station to a corporate cluster, which creates an in-house rivalry against their competition. It’s about how music defines us all and the dysfunctional family behind that definition.