Screenwriting : Pitch Feedback by Merry Citoli

Hi all! I am looking for someone that has a fair amount of experience to take a look at my pitch sheet. I have rewritten this thing so many times that I'm going blind. I have been getting feedback that my protagonist's journey may not be clear enough. It seems like everyone has their own way of reading things. Anyway, I would be happy to return a favor in anyway I can. I'm a composer as well so if anyone needs help in that area, hit me up. Thanks! Merry