Your Stage : Cybelle by Anthony Mouasso

Anthony Mouasso

Cybelle

HI fellow screenwriters, I'm wondering what do you think about that logline: Cybelle GENRES: Independent, Sci-fi, Drama In the Greek-Roman Pantheon, Cybèle was considered as magna mater: The Earth Goddess. In the Cybernetic Age, Cybelle has been defined as an android project to preserve human genome from extinction.

Dan MaxXx

Logline shouldnt require a Wikipedia dictionary. No clue what you are saying. Whats the story?

Anthony Mouasso

Well, I don't want to come across as defensive but, you don't need a Wikipedia dictionary, the explanation is in the logline... Unless you didn't see it...

Anthony Mouasso

Thank you Jim, this is exactly what I needed. :)

Anthony Moore

Not a logline. Try this: Project Cybelle, named after the Greek goddess of Earth, is humanity's last hope to prevent its own extinction and one man must fight the political organization who would see it fail.

Anthony Mouasso

Thanks Anthony, I'll do a few variations over your proposition.

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