Your Stage : My new play by Derek Dean

Hi everyone, my new play is in the table reads and so on portion of it's completition. I was hoping there would be someone out there that would like to read it and give any feedback from a completely outsider, complete stranger perspective of what works and doesn't. As is, I'll probably put the show up Off-Off Broadway and hopefully make a few people's hearts smile. Story is this. Mandi loves Levi. Levi doesn't know. Levi loves Mandi. Mandi doesn't know. Instead they one person with a voice and one person with the ability to write that meet up and figure out songs. When Josh shows up, another person with a voice takes one of Levi's songs and makes it big with them, then comes back to take Mandi away. Levi has to find the words to say to keep her from leaving him forever. Unsung Unsingable Love Songs is a musical for people that hate, love or can't ever book themselves in a musical but would still like to be. It's about Levi, a very strong willed guy that can write but can't sing. And it's about Josh and Mandi, two people that can sing but cannot write. If anyone is interested in reading it let me know, I'll message a pdf of it over to you. Thanks for your time, Derek