I have just completed the 12 rewrite for the comedy I am working on getting to production. Would like to have a fresh set of eyes on it. If anyone would like to read and give me feedback let me know. message me with an email address and I can send it to you. Trying to get it as close to perfection as one can before I send it to Hollywood again.
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