Hello, I recently finished my first full-length movie script on about 110 pages. I was gonna send the script to a producer friend of mine, but before I'm sending it anywhere I was hoping to get some feedback from someone who knows the business and recognizes flaws when they see it. Is there anyone interested in helping me out? Maybe take a look at what to improve, how the story plays out, and the logistics of it. I am fully aware that there are services that do just that, but if anyone would be interested in helping out, let me know. If so, message me here at Stage32 and we'll make it happen. Best regards, Hussni.
Screenwriting : Looking for constructive criticism by Hussni Mörsare
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are you an awesome writer w strong characters. listen to your gut.read it aloud in front of mirror or have actors read it.i am actress who writes.
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Clare, you've got an impressive background. I'dd love to get some help. Message me and we can talk further. Grace, thanks for the advice, I'll sure try it out.
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In the beginning, I didn't know what I dIdn''t know either. No worries! I'll give you notes on page 1. That's all I need to check out your storycraft/style. Then I recommend pro coverage on the entire story before making any moves. Don't show your connect yet. shawnspeake@gmail - https://www.stage32.com/happy-writers/coverage
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Owen, thanks for the input. Are you talking about the synopsis?
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Hehe no worries , was just confused at how you could've red it. Appreciate a look at it though.
Got your e, H! I'll check it out now...
Sent you an e, H! You're off to a great start, my man!