My web show is now out. I've posted the first two scripts. I'm not looking for critiques. If that's what you want to do, you can send me a private message (after you watch the first three episodes) and see about episode 4. The first three webisodes are shot, edited, posted and playing now on three continents. Ep. 1 script http://jgiambrone.wordpress.com/2016/10/27/writing-for-the-screen-1-2g1s/ Ep. 2 script http://jgiambrone.wordpress.com/2016/10/29/writing-for-the-screen-2-2g1s/ https://vimeo.com/186219730