Logline: When a witch who is also a medical doctor is left with three days to raise his stillborn daughter from the dead, he enlists the help of an amateur witch who has three days to save her mother from a deadly virus. This is a logline for my screenplay set in the USA. How do I go about getting a producer for it? Any advice will be highly appreciated please :)
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Please expand a little bit more Rutger. I don't understand
pay $$$$$ for a Producer/ consultant. Ask a working pro in the Industry to pass your script up the ladder Win Nichols or Black List top 10 script make the movie yourself. Wait by the phone and write the next script
www.logline.it is the best site to work on your loglines. Pro's can help you make your logline(s) better. Most of my own loglines have gone to the proces. Putting it on logline.it is the best thing you can do. But I can not guaranty you the best people will react.
Thank you Dan and Rutger . What feedback can you give me on my logline? I will definitely check out logline.it
It feels like you have two stories here, instead of one. Also are there""male witches"; are they not called different-sorcerer? Not sure... But I guess I know what you want to say: these people come together but both already have a different agenda. Still this logline is confusing. Maybe for starters (but still not good at all): "When a medical doctor is left with three days to raise his stillborn daughter from the dead, he enlists the help of an amateur witch who has a split agenda. ---- If this doctor raises his stillborn daughter from the grave we know he is not "just"a doctor. Most Obvious problem here is hat there is no (clear) protagonist. who is the bad guy(s) in your story. Where is the hook? Getting a producer for it? Maybe pitch your story here on stage32, but first you need a kickas logline. Good luck, Rutger
Thanks Rutger. That is very constructive. The notes are very helpful. It sure needs a lot of help. I will get it right :)