Hi Everyone! I am seeking feedback on the rough cut of the trailer for my short film (below). The text cards are temporary in terms of design (I plan to animate them). Also, the soundtrack is temp as well, with some transition issues, which I will work out once I locked picture on the trailer. I mainly want to know your thoughts on this. Would it make you want to see the film? Do you think the heroine will find what she is looking for?
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Need feedback on the rough cut of the trailer for my short film!
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I think you can pick up the pace.
yea, trailer needs to be trimmed. Kinda slow crawl to the story, Would I pay? No. The trailer is missing "money" shots: bedroom scenes, funnier moments, add some "Harry met Sally" banter, up-tempo music..
Yes, I actually trimmed it. I posted the new version today!
It says, VIDEO UNAVAILABLE.
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Sorry, here is the link with a shorter version. Btw there are no bedrooms scenes, sadly...:( https://youtu.be/5GehMS0yqEA
I like it !