Screenwriting : Needing inspiration by Roxanne Paukner

Roxanne Paukner

Needing inspiration

Can anybody suggest a good feature to watch/read where the antagonist is not a person? (circumstance like disease, poverty, etc. or self/"inner demons"?) Thanks in advance. My brain is stuck right now so my script is too.

Wal Friman

Awakenings 1990. Screenplay: Steven Zaillian.

Phillip E. Hardy, Prolifique

There's an old 1966 movie called Night of the Grizzly where the bear is the protagonist. It's a good old time. Of course there is Jaws, Godzilla, Cujo and scores of others along those lines.

Darjan Petrović

Well, does it count The Pursuit of Happyness for poverty ?

Eric Christopherson

The Shallows, Jaws, Alien, Gravity, All is Lost, The Perfect Storm, The Birds, The Terminator, Lord of the Rings.

Darjan Petrović

This is really an interesting topic, if you think about it. I am sure she is not looking for "monster" antagonists. There are countless extremely well known and easy to find stories with that type of antagonism. She aims for "thin air" type of antagonism, physically not existing entity.

Like I mentioned example for poverty The Pursuit of Happyness where goal is pure survival in modern society, same thing in Where God Left His Shoes, if I remember it well, or Two Days, One Night with Marion Cotillard. Right at Your Door as an example for disease, there is no mutation of any kind and physical threat, just a toxic air. In The Man from Earth is about clash of beliefs, discussion about probability, theoretical battle and nothing more.

Eric Christopherson

You're right, Darjan, I somehow skipped reading the parentheses in the OP's question in my above response. In particularly modern film there is usually an inner demon of some kind, some flaw of the protagonist that is antagonistic to an objective goal in addition to an actual, living, breathing antagonist. In regard to disease or poverty type antagonists, I can think of A Raisin in the Sun and The Andromeda Strain.

Darjan Petrović

Inner demon could be attached as major part of pretty much every character arc, as a defined flaw/fear etc. that protagonist overcome. I can't think of true and pure inner demon antagonism right now as only thing protagonist wants to beat. But there is !!!Forrest Gump!!! who doesn't compete with anything or anybody, not even challenging himself, he just do things with one in a zillion success ratio.

Roxanne Paukner

Thanks everyone! I knew I'd get some good suggestions. And yes, Darjan, I am looking for antagonism that is "thin air," as you say.

Fleurette M Van Gulden

Mimic

Tamim Almousa

50/50

Debbie Croysdale

Just a thought, the iceberg in Titanic was a pretty ruthless antagonist. Sorry if you did not mean acts of nature. An example of inside antagonist, think the “mother” part of Norman Bates mind in Psycho.

Fleurette M Van Gulden

Bates mind is his Antagonist! I must look deep into that. I took his condition to be the internal flaw, his own nemises. He'll remain a Psycho because he can't recognize his flaw, therfore no change. A&E series Bates Motel, answered with Norman's Backstory.

Debbie Croysdale

Hi was referring to @Roxanne’s Question where she used the words “Inner Demons...” as Antagonist. In films such as Secret Window, Primal Fear, Psycho Etc The main character has a split personality struggle, where their bad side can sometimes be detrimental to themselves aswell as to others. Although I admit my comment above did not make much sense because I wrote it while waiting to board a plane, but thats what I meant to say at the time.

Roxanne Paukner

Whoever suggested "Brooklyn," thanks. That was a good one to watch and read/study!

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