Your Stage : Need Feedback on Horror film Treatment (in short story form) by Paul Onaga

Hello everyone, just finished a 27 page film treatment for a small indie Horror film I plan on filming in the near future and would like to get your feedback on it. The treatment is in a short story form and can be downloaded from my "Screenplay" link.  LOGLINE: A young man visits the old town in the woods where he lost his younger brother years ago. Upon arrival he befriends the daughter of the head of a excavation crew and soon they uncover the dark secrets of the woods. https://www.stage32.com/profile/659083/Screenplay/Harwich-working-title-3