www.stage32.com/profile/143374/Screenplay/Cut-the-Blue-Wire I need some awesome brains to look at this. It's a rather genre defying stoner sci-fi thriller with some very cosmic and existential themes. Several writers have encouraged me to renew focus on this script, so I have taken some good advice, and accomplished an upgrade of a script that I know still has problems, and that's where I need the help, I Need more input at this point.
If you have an awesome brain, or even a regular one that contains the relevant knowledge i don't have, I invite you to take a look at this script , posted in my loglines, and linked here.
Apologies for using this page as a kind of de-facto film school. I know you're all busy. making good movies happen as it is, but something tells me I should just ride this pony Til it drops if I know what's good for me. Thank you and goodnight.