feedback welcome. i trust I have your vote, make Hollywood great again! (not that it doesn't rock now)
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Hey bro, i read first 10 pages and the setup was confusing. Had to go back pages to know Devon/Chase are the same character. Lots of monologue talking. Not sure of the tone. The CAP words on the pages are an eyesore.
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Hey bro, i read first 10 pages and the setup was confusing. Had to go back pages to know Devon/Chase are the same character. Lots of monologue talking. Not sure of the tone. The CAP words on the pages are an eyesore.