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It seems surreal with a paranormal edge. Cool Camera work draws you into a strange betwixt world state but wasn’t sure at times if another character was speaking aswell because someone says to do bad stuff. (Orator at beginning seems nice girl so why should she do bad). I would add more dialogue or text to explain story more. Readers need to know what its all about early, unless they are meant to be guessing. Cool idea!
Thank you for all the advise given Debbie Croysdale . I was trying to induce an atmosphere of mystery to get the public curious about the story behind. More dialogue sounds interesting. I'll work on it.
I'm sorry for the late reply. I wasn't able to use stage32 for a while then got stuck with lots of work and completely forgot about thanking you properly.