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Iraia Nulo

My first "proper" short film

Hello all, I submitted a short film to the Notodofilmfest, I'm still waiting to see if it's one of the finalists. It's the second short film that I make, but to be honest, it is the fist that I make "properly". I'd like to know your thoughts about it or if you have any questions about it, whatever really.

I hope you enjoy it.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FPZ_KAKiEFs

Eoin O'Sullivan

HI Iraia, congrats on completing your short. From the clip you posted, the biggest issue for me is the lighting. I get that you're going a naturally lit look, but I still think you need some soft fill to light the actors faces.

Dan MaxXx

Cant see anything. Darkly lit

Sarl Godwins

uh...according to comments and view, you need improvement with light, but nevertheless, your story and shoot can be termed good...if not great...

Iraia Nulo

Eoin O'Sullivan Dan MaxXx Sarl Godwins Thank you for your comments. Yes, that's the main problem. I had no budget so I could only use nightstand lamps and I only had a couple of them at home, so I tried to do as much as I could, and couldn't use DaVinci resolve and colour grading in premiere pro isn't the best thing ever haha. I have a few more ideas for dark lighting scenes but I'll wait until I can light them better.

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