Hey guys, me again.
Please give this opening scene a gander. It’s 3 pages - riot draft (link below).
I wanna know what tone you feel and if possible list a show or movie that springs to mind.
I’ll add a description of the rest of the screenplay later on in the comments to avoid any influence.
You’re the best!
https://www.stage32.com/sites/stage32.com/files/assets/screenplay/587053...
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Cool! Reminds me of Memento with Guy Pearce.
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OMG! Where’s the rest? I was really taken by it. Who is this “Cloke”? Why was he killed? Post more. Lol!