Jason Mirch, Director of Script Services is a hard task master. He turns himself into one of those viewers who follows every character through thick and thin.
He then feeds the writer's brain with what has to be cut to speed the pace, or how to redevelop the narrative. No mercy here.
With Jason, there is no danger getting his version overlaying mine, because he is in tune with the writer. That's worth all the money we have to spend on these re-writes.
Looking forward working on the second draft.
Wow Renate Morley! Thanks for the review and thoughts. All of my comments are coming from a place of caring for the writer and the script. Think of it like hiring a trainer or a coach. With every training session, you get closer to your goal. But sometimes there is pain involved! :) But rest assured, every draft you write is getting better!