Just a heads up. One of the things that happens to screenwriters, myself included, is that sometimes, we get caught up in the world we are creating on the page, that we may not be able to see what works and what may be creating a problem for us in a character's introduction, the turning point, or even a motivation. Most times, the only way we receive constructive feedback is when we send it to a competition and then we see where we can trim some pages or condense an idea in order to tighten the pace and make those moments count. I am asking, any writer, if you need some feedback and want some notes, I'm happy to help. I believe that every story can be strengthened if we step out of our echo chambers and read what others might be thinking.
Happy to help.
Michael
