I am not sure if this is allowed but I have a draft of a pilot that I wrote and want to know where I need to tighten it up and what's working and what isn't. I actually would love to share this with a few writers and get their feedback. If you have any interest in helping out I'd appreciate it.
Screenwriting : Beta Readers? by Jared Moses
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Hi Jared, I'll take a look! Let's exchange emails through PM
Hi Jarod, I'd be happy to read your script. Maybe we can swap. I like to get other writers interpretations of things. DM me with your email.
Brandon
Hey Jarod, what genre is it?
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Jarod before you share your script I suggest you copyright it. Just in case someone tries to get it made after you've sent it to them, you'll have legal standing to sue.
There's that, and you might want to send a maximum of 10 pages. That way for sure no one will rip you off for the whole thing.
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Jared, I'm in the Springfield area, I'd be glad to look at your pilot. I'm also a member of a writing group down in Chatham. We meet the first Tuesday of every month, on Zoom now of course. Some of them might also be willing to take a look.
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Yeah, send it on over if you'd like, but I'd also recommend a great site called Coverfly. There's a section on it where you can submit your stuff for feedback from other writers, and also review their works as well. It's totally free, too!