Hey there, I'm Cody.
So I am currently working on this pilot series. it's called Enchanted.
Set in a small country call Barbados and inspired by Charmed (1998), it follows a trio of brothers stunned to discover their witch heritage. Soon, the threesome must fight against millennium demons that plaque their home island.
What are your thoughts?
The plot can be found in my Loglines.
The brothers lost their father who was basically the center of their world. So, losing him is taking a toll on three of them. The youngest turns to drugs to cope, the middle closes himself off and the eldest is basically trying to keep it together. To the brothers, their father committed suicide but when they discover their witch heritage, they learn that their father was murdered.
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It would be good to mention that they need to learn how to fight against the demons and hint at what might happen should they fail. This is a quick way to show how the characters will develop and what is at stake.
Uh, I would TOTALLY watch that! We so rarely see warlocks (or male witches), and the rare appearance (Vampire Diaries, for one) is too fleeting to fully enjoy. To add to what Ewan said, I would wonder why they are plaguing that area in particular. With Buffy, it was the Hellmouth. But the location and re-interpretation sounds awesome!
Yes Ewan Dunbar It's like Charmed meets The Vampire Diaries. They are going to resort to the family grimoire as their tool to fighting against the demons.
To answer your question, Karen: it would all tie in loosely with their ancestor who basically banished a great evil into a mystical prison. Demons will stop at nothing to end the last of the powerful witch's bloodline -- the brothers!
That's something the series will be leaning towards Gary Floyd whereas one of the brothers will born in like a center of a pentagram which will be a representation for light and darkness. And he's been suppressing his darkness however with magic, it has its way of coming out especially when in direr situations
finish the script and then ask for feedback. You're already second guessing your decisions by asking strangers opinions of a unfinished script.
script is finish