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Bridgette Grace

Looking For Logline Opinions

I did post these in the Logline board but am looking for other options on which one is the best for the Tv show I am developing. I have also provided the synopsis. SYNOPSIS: Emotional, cinematic, and rooted in character, TaylorWood is a love letter to the marriage of teen drama and supernatural fear. This story begins in the quaint town of TaylorWood. The town looks so wholesome that anyone on the outside would be oblivious to what goes on there, especially at TaylorWood High. TaylorWood High is far from normal; as a large group of the students that inhabit the school are anything but human. The town and high school are turned upside down when their rival high school BlackRidge High from the next town over closes. What’s meant to be a peaceful middle of the year high school transfer quickly turns sinister when old and new supernaturals find themselves mixed together. Causing not only a potent effect for the students at the high school but for the whole town as things turn from bad to worse when Paxton Monroe, one of the few human students at the school ends up disappearing into the night. Only to be found murdered in the school football field with the overwhelming evidence that it wasn’t another human who killed him; leaving the supernaturals to grapple with the realization that one or more of them were involved in the murder. As the school year progresses, every day that passes seems to get darker than the last as they begin to peel back the layers of the case and town. The packs and the coven's lives become intertwined with one another in a clash of lifestyles, resentments, envy, and forbidden sexual attraction. As they figure out that the town itself is far from perfect as it has seen more than its fair share of murder, supernaturalism, scandal, and violence. Every possible suspect and reason for Paxton's death is cycled through before dropping the bomb, of who is responsible for the murder revealing the biggest villain of them all. The last person anyone would suspect, who wanted to watch each individual unravel and incriminate themselves, to win in a dark game of having the supernaturals reveal their true identity. While also feeling weak and lost as they tore each other apart and divided themselves into groups against one another changing everyone’s lives forever. Life and high school are about survival, and in TaylorWood survival just became the ultimate game. Option 1: While navigating the troubled waters of romance, school and family, a gang of supernatural teens become entangled in Taylorwood's small town mysteries. Option 2: Set in the small town of Taylorwood, teenage creatures of unspeakable horror lurk beneath the towns wholesome facade. As two high schools come together unleashing a dark world of horror, magic, and murder. Option3: Taylorwood is a surprising and subversive take on supernatural teen life, exploring the surrealism of living in a small town; as darkness and horror bubbles beneath the wholesome facade. Option 4: After a teenager is murdered within the town of TaylorWood, a group of supernatural teens all from different covens and packs try to unravel the evils lurking within this seemingly innocent town. Option 5: Set in the town of Taylorwood, a gang of supernatural teens must reconcile their differences and work together to fight the evil forces that threaten their family, friends and town. Option 6: The lives, loves, dangers and disasters of the town of TaylorWood are turned upside down when it merges with the town of BlackRidge. Committing the supernatural and the human residents to dramatic and horrific results.

Niksa Maric

I would go with option 1 and option 4 as a backup. BTW, you have 6 options, you wrote option 2 twice.

Matthew Kunkel

I like option 1 and option 3, if it was my decision. Great synopsis!

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