Time Swap A high school mean girl switch bodies with a hitman part of a curse, gets poisoned by an fellow hitman and must return to her body before it kills her.
Screenwriting : Revised logline help by Tony Byrd
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Hi Tony, I read your logline and I immediately thought of "Hot Chick" - An attractive and popular teenager, who is mean-spirited towards others, finds herself in the body of an older man, and must find a way to get back to her original body.
Obviously, time is of essence in your plot. I think you should perhaps include how your protagonist came upon this switch (e.g. magic spell, curse, etc.) and how she was poisoned.
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"After a high school mean girl switches bodies with a hitman and gets poisoned, she must return to her body before the poison kills her."
I was listen to an interview on the weekend. I have heard of “Freaky”. I think it may be worth some investigation.
I revised it.
Tony,
I heard Vince Vaughan talk about his new film “Freaky”. It is exactly this from what I can see.
They pitched it as
“Freaky Friday, the 13th”