Screenwriting : Good Morning, Mr. Kay Feedback by Emily Phillips

Emily Phillips

Good Morning, Mr. Kay Feedback

Good afternoon, everyone!

I am seeking proofreaders for my screenplay Good Morning, Mr. Kay. The screenplay is on the Blacklist, Script Mother, and I can also send PDFs for anyone that would like to read it.

It is currently undergoing it's first peer editing round, and if anyone would like to help, that would be amazing!

Logline: Mr. Kay, a forlorn surgeon, finds comfort in an unusual therapist named Eve, a strange creature that lives in the interdimensional realm of White Space.

Dan Guardino

If you want people here to read it, why don't you post it here?

Emily Phillips

Dan Guardino Sorry, I am new here. I didn't know that we could post full screenplays :)

Dan Guardino

Emily. No problem and welcome to Stage 32.

Maurice Vaughan

Welcome, Emily Phillips. How are you?

Emily Phillips

Maurice Vaughan I am doing wonderful! Just trying to relax before bed :) How are you?

Maurice Vaughan

I'm fine. Working on a short script. The main character in it is named "Emilia" (close to your name).

Emily Phillips

Maurice Vaughan Ah, I love that name! What's your script's logline?

Divyam Jha

Hello ma'am, I'm ready and more than just excited to proofread your screenplay. :) :)

Emily Phillips

Divyam Jha Ay, thank you! :) I do have it up on Stage 32 now!

Divyam Jha

Oh, okay. I will check it out then.

Patricia White
  1. Respectfully, the log line needs revision, and 2. A script should not be posted on sites that read and evaluate it until it's 100% done. Why would you put an incomplete project up for review if you're still editing it?

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