Screenwriting : I had a great call with Angela Cristantello by Jason Leach

Hello everyone! I just wanted to share with you that I had a tremendous call with Angela Cristantello, you provided me with feedback on the pilot episode of my sitcom. She provided me with excellent advice such as providing more information in the action sequence, adding more of a contemporary twist to some scenes, and to not repeat what I mentioned in action, with dialogue. We also talked about the theme for the entire first season and tips to make the audience want to root for the character. I've already begun working on my revisions and I'm very excited about the prospect of my sitcom. I would definitely recommend reaching out to Angela about your writing project so that she can provide you with feedback.