A Producer's pov. The script for 8 Minutes with God; the writing is way to fat, stuffed with way more exposition than needed and the dialog blocks are way to long (few Actors could master 'em). In my opinion, you have a dull, uninteresting 'talking 'heads' short script. Remember that I'm only one small time operator and I do not speak for all (other's mileage will differ). I apologize if you find this difficult - but it's my truth.
Doug, I appreciate the honest feedback. I might try to re-arrange some of the dialogue and exposition. Maybe you might have some other honest feedback on my other posted scripts, if you get the opportunity?
Register / Log In
1 person likes this
Hi Neil. Scripts or completed short films?
1 person likes this
Just scripts so far. I have one feature and three shorts listed.
What kind of comments? Feed back comments or ...
1 person likes this
Anything at all. Basically, if you like them and if there's anything you would charge
What comments are you looking for specifically? Are these questions you feel producers would be able to speak to?
Yes, I'd like producers feedback
A Producer's pov. The script for 8 Minutes with God; the writing is way to fat, stuffed with way more exposition than needed and the dialog blocks are way to long (few Actors could master 'em). In my opinion, you have a dull, uninteresting 'talking 'heads' short script. Remember that I'm only one small time operator and I do not speak for all (other's mileage will differ). I apologize if you find this difficult - but it's my truth.
Doug, I appreciate the honest feedback. I might try to re-arrange some of the dialogue and exposition. Maybe you might have some other honest feedback on my other posted scripts, if you get the opportunity?
Thnaks again.