Logline : As simple as that he is Media Guy – very naive amateur journalist, almost stupid in some cases but at his best he is the “Top Gun” committed to excellence.
Sometimes shame, sometimes pride of his USFTV company; fired or hired again Media Guy is the star no matter where he is, no matter what he does for living – factory worker, telemarketing job or stripping.
Greetings newbies! I’m Susan Kaufman and I’ve been with Stahe 32 for l my pre than 10 years. Right now I have an amazing high concept idea. Trying to figure out screenplay or streaming! I’ll figure it out. Good Luck all. You’re gonna rock!
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When I was starting out, I had no idea what a logline was. I assumed it was just a quippy hook to sink into the gills of other readers. A logline is more of a summation of your entire screenplay (Characters, inciting incident, setting, goals and stakes.) Your logline currently reads more like a tagline.
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Ure pitching this Serbia or outside? If outside, get it little tighter like : who- where -goal-obstacle/stakes
nah. your logline reveals your opinion about character. did not immerse me as reader into why I should desperately know more.