Screenwriting : The Car Guys by Tony Byrd

Tony Byrd

The Car Guys

A man teams up with a group of animals to start a heist to rob cars.

Daniel Stuelpnagel

Tony Byrd cheers man, I like this 'cause it's got movement and cinematic you know juice.

So give us the details. Please. A man is what kind of man, he's the guy that has to vacuum the pet hair from people's coats at the dry cleaning store.

And then the "group" is actually a ... book club, it's an animals books club all right.

The animals are all ____________ either dinosaurs, insects, fluffy bunnies or avatar-freaky NFT bubblegum goony birds, OK?

So then WHY they start the heist? because !! the guy got some NFTs and the bank said they don't take bitcoin or whatever and he's got 24 hours to juice up the account ? something

So you got scenes of animals reading books and bitching about how the author didn't accomplish the turn? it's a nother fucking industry picture bro

Tony Byrd

1) He is a thief comes out of retirement. 2) They’re bunnies.

Tony Ray

Tony Byrd Is this something you're working on or is it already finished? Because this sounds amazing.

Tony Byrd

I’m working on it.

Tony Ray

If you need someone to read it when you're finished, let me know.

Tony Byrd

Alright. Thanks.

Jime Jennifer

Sounds nice and creative. Lots of outside the box plotting.

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