Hello, I'm Cris, I just finished my very first screenplay, it's not great but at least writing it is over. I have always loved writing and usually do short stories just for the fun of it but I thought this time I would try my hand a something new and see what happen. Grateful for any tips anyone has. Please check out my logline and synopsis and give feedback, thanks.
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Congrats Cris! That’s a huge step!
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Welcome, Crisinta M. Glad you're part of the community. Congrats on finishing your first script. What's your plan for it?
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Also, if you need any screenwriting advice, let me know.
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Put it in a drawer and write another. Then another and another and another. :)
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Welcome! If you need an extra set of eyes on your script, I’d be happy to read it.
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thank so much guys for the welcome. I may need another set of eyes on it. Thanks James, Maurice. I want to enter it in a few of the contest coming up, It's no where near ready yet. I know I have so much work to do still.
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You're welcome, Crisinta M. I'll read the script when you're ready to share it.
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First, don't sell yourself short. Second, I often read poor scripts that can make wonderful movies, they just need some work.
Several people have offered to read your script. pick one or two. I would be willing to read it as well. I don't know your background so it is hard to recommend steps to take.
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Welcome, Crisinta! I guess we are in the same boat! I finished my first screenplay last month!
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Hearing you work performed is the best way to see what works. Join us at LA Play Reading on Facebook.
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that's awesome @Jo Gomesh How it is going so far with it? any leads or contests entered?
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Thanks Stephen Olson, I'm not on FB but I agree hearing it out loud would give some real life to it.
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Crisinta M I have entered two festivals. What about you? Are you thinking of applying?
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You don’t finish unless you start
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JO Gomesh, how did the festivals go? Did you win anything?
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