I've been working away on TV pilot scripts for a year now but don't have anyone in my network who could offer genuine insight. Wondering if anyone would like to swap scripts for some feedback before I start my journey towards representation.
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Hi Jack,
We can swap if you like I have a 91 page script "The Gavel." If your pilot is sixty pages, you can read the first 60 pages of "The Gavel."
I also have the pilot for that movie, but feels no good yet, it doesn't have the slow burn setup I feel a pilot should have; sure, enough action but also a slow setup of characters, and conflict is needed, leaving much open, to be played out in next episodes.
Best, Rutger
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I can swap scripts with you, Jack Walsh. I have a Fantasy/Comedy pilot (animated kids TV show).
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Rutger Oosterhoff I would be interested in reading. I am currently writing roughly 30-40 page pilots so perhaps I could have you read two? I don't mind if the page count is a little imbalanced. I'm currently punching up a draft of my latest script, would you like me to send you them in the next couple of days?
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Maurice Vaughan Fantastic. Thanks for responding, I'm interested in the sound of that. As I said to Rutger, I am just punching up a current draft. Would you be happy for me to reach out in the next coming days?
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Sure, send them to roosterhoff@outlook.com
Cheers, Rutger
Well, some writer-guy says you dont need rep.
https://www.theatlantic.com/magazine/archive/1945/11/writers-in-hollywoo...
That's fine, Jack. My email is storytelling200@gmail.com.
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Hi Maurice Vaughan, I have emailed you
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@Rutger Oosterhoff I have also emailed you
Thanks, Jack Walsh.