FREE OFFER! No strings attched.
I wanted to offer to read one page of anything you've written. For FREE. No strings attached. After all, we're alll in this together.
An elevator pitch. A script. Or marketing and promotional material. Gimme a shot at improving what youi're trying to say.
I'm not looking for it to lead to anything else. I have a full time gig as the Official SpokesHuman for Mother Nature. And with our overly hot planet hurtling towards extinction, I've got my hands full.But maybe I can show you things like words that end in "Ing" are weak (Not launching, I launched). How you almost never need to use the word "that." On how to write more conversationally.
The offer carries an Expiration Date of July 1, 2022. Take me up on it.
Jack
Love your collaborative spirit, Jack. Very generous of you!