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I just read my pitch feedback from a Pitch Session with Nick Waters (executive producer of the Paramount Pictures film MARGAUX, and co-producer of The Komack Company film SHELTER IN PLACE). The feedback is great! I mainly received 4s. Nick gave me an incredible note that'll elevate my NIGHT CRIER pitch!
I recommend Nick for Pitch Sessions when he's available again (https://www.stage32.com/scriptservices/pitch-sessions).
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Well done Maurice ! I'm a bit nervous waiting for my feedback so it truly helps to see you got such a great feedback & a note to help improve your pitch !
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Thanks, Stephanie Munch. It is nervous waiting for the feedback. :) Hope you get great feedback. Let us know how it goes.
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I'll let you know :)
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Maurice Vaughan - so excited for you!! Congratulations!!
Ok, Stephanie Munch. Thanks.
Thanks, Shellie Schmals. I already made the changes in the synopsis (based on Nick's note).
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Sounds like you are in full gear moving forward!
Thanks, Shadow Dragu-Mihai, Esq., Ipg. After receiving Nick's note and reading back over my synopsis, I saw that parts of the synopsis were unclear. I Sometimes I think things are clear, but really, they aren't. That's why I like to get fresh eyes on things. And yes, I'm in full gear moving forward. :)
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That's awesome!
Thanks, Jesse James Hennessy. How are things?
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That’s awesome Maurice! Do you already have copyrights in place for NIGHT CRIER before pitching? I feel like it’d be better to be safe than sorry but maybe that’s just me
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Thanks, Olivia Drake. Yes, I registered NIGHT CRIER with the U.S. Copyright Office when it was titled KILL THE MONSTER. I've heard from members on here that it's not a problem to switch to a different title after registering a script with the U.S. Copyright Office.
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Love hearing this feedback Maurice! Thank you for sharing!
You're welcome, Sam Mannetti. I plan to continue pitching through Stage 32.
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Congratulations on your success with pitching! That's awesome Maurice.
Thanks, GiGi. It's great when someone sees a problem that you didn't see. That's one reason I get feedback.