I just finished the rough draft of my Christmas script. I'm going to correct obvious errors and then wait for a few days to dive back into it and begin the real work. I know that I won't be the one that titles it if It ever gets bought, but I've been thinking about something to use when marketing it. So far I have three tentative titles: Holiday Desserts: Home Sweet Homes; Just Desserts: Home Sweets Home; or Just Desserts. The script is kind of a scrooge type story and it does involve two rival bakeries. Which title gets your attention? I like the ambiguity of the title Just Desserts, but I don't know if it would confuse people or intrigue them.
Screenwriting : Script finished by Steven M. Cross
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"Home Sweets Home"! Changing "Sweet" to "Sweets" is creative and makes the title stand out.
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Hi Steven, I think Just Desserts is great! It really goes with the "two rival bakeries" idea.
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I love this idea!! Holiday movies are cute and fun.
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Agree with @Molly Just Desserts is succinct & punchy. Home Sweets Home is a creative spoonerism but also a guessing game.
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Just Desserts sounds just right!
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Steven, I love me some "Just Desserts!" (And all the VERY BEST to you on that Christmas script!)
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Just Desserts is a nice title.