Screenwriting : Looking for feedback on pitch deck by Douglas Brown

Douglas Brown

Looking for feedback on pitch deck

Hello All,

I have a question and a request to ask. I'm not promoting the project yet because it still needs polish.

I'm the writer and artist of a graphic novel that I've always envisioned living beyond the printed page. Regarding the writing, I have 4 of the issues (episodes) self-published, and I think there's enough artwork to assemble a deck. A while back, I looked at a webinar about how to put together a deck and have done so, but before I send it out to anyone, I'm hoping to have more eyes check it out.

If someone were interested in reading the script, could I send them a copy of the comics? This would make the most sense, but every industry has its rules. Or do I still need to transcribe it into a traditional script format?

I put the deck in my logline section if you want to look. Thanks.

Ewan Dunbar

You can get feedback from industry professionals here under the script services page.

Douglas Brown

Thanks for the feedback, Ewan. I'm considering using that option when I polish the deck more. It's tough to throw $100+, knowing it's a rough draft.

Langley Coleman

Douglas Brown Hey Doug! wow, your line work and colors are great! I see self-published comics all the time and they're not usually so nice-looking. I'd love to take a look at anything, if my feedback can be helpful! I'm a huuuge comics nerd.

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