Screenwriting : Looking for feedback by Noah Mccay

Noah Mccay

Looking for feedback

Hello,

I just finished a draft of a new short film and I was hoping to get some initial feedback on it. Would anyone be interested?

Logline: Jess isn’t just a final girl she’s THE final girl. Blessed with self-healing and immortality she uses her powers to hunt slasher killers and then ghostwrites the movies that have been capturing the minds of horror fans for decades.

Hoping to eventually make the short and use it as proof of concept for a feature.

Shaun Baland

Hi Noah,

I'm down! Sounds like a fun read! I'm a new writer but happy to give you my thoughts.

Shaun

Noah Mccay

Shaun Baland shoot me a dm with your email and I will send the script on over

Nick Waters

Nice logline Noah Mccay! I recommend checking out some of the short film education here on Stage 32 that could help you get this project off the ground. I've included some links below. And feel free to reach out to us directly for any help or questions at edu@stage32.com

https://www.stage32.com/classes/Stage-32-4-Part-Class-Producing-Short-Fo...

https://www.stage32.com/webinars/How-To-Avoid-Pitfalls-As-A-Short-Film-F...

https://www.stage32.com/webinars/How-To-Make-Your-Logline-Attractive-to-...

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