Screenwriting : Need a critique of my query email by Bob Johnson

Bob Johnson

Need a critique of my query email

I've had zero responses to an email query marketing my latest screenplay, Secret Santa, a Hallmark-style Christmas romcom. I know from experience that the odds of getting a response are low, but I have never had this poor a result before. Would anyone be willing to take a quick look and see if anything jumps out as being bad? I might be missing something... or maybe it's the strikes?

Dawn Greenfield

Strikes are over. Let me read your script and your letter. Won't do me very much good to read the letter without knowing the depth of the script. Send PDFs to dawn@degreenfield.com

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