Hi guys, my name is Jack Murphy and I just came out with my new horror short film. Would love some critical feedback, and thoughts about it. Just asking for some help! Thanks!
Short film: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GilHxOLSsVQ&t=1s
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What a tense, spooky film, Jack. I like how you kept the colour and sound in limited spectrums giving a contained feeling to it all. Wishing you much success with it.
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Thank you for taking the time to reintroduce yourself to the community, Jack Murphy!
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Very good job, Jack. I enjoyed it.
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Great job on the film, Jack Murphy! It's suspenseful, scary in places, and I really liked the twists! And you made this film for $25. IMPRESSIVE! The cast and crew did great as well!
There are two things I noticed in the film:
#1) At 1:57, the camera operator turns around in the bathroom. I think the turn could've been smoother.
#2) At 9:32, Tommy and Andre talk about the dead body close to the building where people can hear them. I think it would've been better if they talked in code or talked by Andre's car (away from the building so no one could hear them).
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Thanks for sharing Jack Murphy! Can’t wait to check it out!