Your Stage : Perfect -Stage32- first 10 pages scorecard by Rutger Oosterhoff

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Rutger Oosterhoff

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7 months ago

Perfect -Stage32- first 10 pages scorecard

Here's the first 10 pages scorecard for the feature screenplay "SerialTwins", written by Jerel Damon, Story by Rutger Oosterhoff and Robert Arthur Jansen. Revisions by Rutger Oosterhoff. https://www.stage32.com/pay/3415231733879022399

Maurice Vaughan

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7 months ago

Congratulations to you, Jerel, and Robert on getting all 5s and a Writer Recommend, Rutger Oosterhoff! I'm gonna keep Nikki Bohm in mind for feedback.

Rutger Oosterhoff

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7 months ago

Thanks Maurice! I've experienced that directors and actors/actresses appreciate the screenplays Jerel and I worked on more than (purely) producers. They probably look at them ftom an different angle but - one way or the other - often don't have the resources to make them see the light.

Maurice Vaughan

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7 months ago

You're welcome, Rutger Oosterhoff. I think you need to find the right producer who focuses on that kind of movie. You could search the Browse Members Section for producers (www.stage32.com/people).

And speaking of that kind of movie, what kind of movie is SERIAL TWINS? It says SERIAL TWINS is a Film-noir and Adventure on your logline page, but the movie looks like a Horror from the poster, and you mention vigilantism in the synopsis. Nikki Bohm also mentioned superhero in her feedback.

Rutger Oosterhoff

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7 months ago

Yes the horror poster indeed directs you to think it is a horror movie, while in fact it it is a detective movie with superhero / adventure / horror / film noir elements. In other words, it's a hybrid. It's a world where 'Sin City' meets 'Twin City'.