Hello! I am looking for 1-2 beta readers to want to read my screenplay.
"Soulful Riches" follows Imani, a determined young Black woman, as she accepts a Faustian bargain from a mysterious money demon to restore her father's legacy, only to find herself entangled in the hollow pursuit of success, leading to a journey of redemption and self-discovery.
that’s the logline! comment below if you are interested!
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Hi Bintou,
sounds great. I’d be happy to read and provide feedback.
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Great! My Instagram is bin2\_writes, so we can talk over there :)
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I found this one as an example, the tension, the stakes, character, "The water is contaminated, causing normal people to do insane things. Now, two dysfunctional old residents fight back to uncover the vengeful man responsible, or the community will implode" Try to condense to conflict.
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Love that you're using the community to find beta readers! When you're read for exec feedback, shoot me an email at success@stage32.com :)