Screenwriting : Johnstown by John Radzniak

John Radzniak

Johnstown

Quite an assembly of compelling stories collected here! Somewhat daunting.

Johnstown is set against the backdrop of the Johnstown Flood of 1889. In post-civil war Johnstown Valley, PA, a headstrong young woman, grieving the death of her only child, finds her marriage to an embittered factory worker fraying when he gets involved in a labor strike and she is tempted by an old flame. Meanwhile, a deteriorating dam threatens to destroy the town.

I wrote the first draft of Johnstown several years ago, after finding David McCullough’s account of the Johnstown Flood on a library shelf. I was immediately riveted by the sheer magnitude of the tragedy: A Biblical-quality storm, a weakened dam giving way, and 2,200 lives lost, the most in a single day on American soil until 9/11. However, as I worked through several drafts, I started to see the flood in a largely metaphorical way: the deteriorating, threatening dam shadows the protagonists' crumbling marriage, and simultaneously foretells a violent, sweeping social change.

The story is set in the Gilded Age, a time after the Civil War of tremendous economic disparity, class resentment, growing restlessness and frustration amongst the working class, anti-immigrant fervor, and sometimes violent social upheaval – a near mirror of our current moment in history. My goal with Johnstown was to create a relevant and contemporary story in period garb.

Amanda F T Bowen

A great POV for the Johnstown flood! I'm a Pennsylvania resident and a local history buff so I would love to see this.

Maurice Vaughan

That's great that you started to see the flood in a largely metaphorical way, John Radzniak. I try to make my writing metaphorical any chance I get. It gives readers something to ponder on. Objects, character actions, locations, color, etc. I use them to symbolize things.

Jeffrey Knepper

just one year before the first black owned bank in America was chartered...almost done with my historical fiction/gangster/fantasy script which involves time traveling from this present day

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