What should a one page synopsis include in a short and a feature script? There are so many things to include, I'm overwhelmed. Everything seems key points. Some key points are hard to do because they bring on others. If I go on readers will be discouraged and give up on reading the synopsis. But, if I omit something readers will say, "Is that it!"
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It can be overwhelming writing a one-page synopsis, Claude Gagne.
"Everything seems key points." The thing is to include the key-key points (the most important key points).
"Some key points are hard to do because they bring on others. If I go on readers will be discouraged and give up on reading the synopsis. But, if I omit something readers will say, 'Is that it!'" I keep rewriting a synopsis until I find a balance so I'm not including too many details and so I'm not being vague/withholding too much information. I'll read through the synopsis after I write it and ask myself "is this too much info?" and "will the synopsis make sense to a producer/director/etc. if I leave out this key point?"
A lot of times writers think they need certain information in a synopsis, but it's really not needed.
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I recommend searching the written pitch of Star Wars that fits on one page. I looked it over every time I made a written pitch for my screenplays.
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Thanks, Maurice and Anthony. I'll go and research different pitches to well known movies along the theme of my screenplay. It should give me pointers on what I need. I'll repost my loglines with the synopsis when I have them written. It's a real brain confusion to write! It's a should I or shouldn't I include this or that!
You're welcome, Claude Gagne. Great idea. I also suggest emailing success@stage32.com and asking for their most recent written pitch examples. It's two examples. One for a feature and one for a show.
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A key skill every screenwriter needs to learn is the ability to summarise a story into whatever length is needed. The more you practice, the more enjoyable it becomes.
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You're right, CJ Walley. I've been summarizing and reposting Stage 32's daily blogs for a while. It helped me get better at summarizing my scripts. Summarizing blogs, movies, articles, etc. is a great exercise that writers should consider doing.
And I like to write two synopses for feature scripts. A short synopsis (about 5-6 sentences) and a full synopsis (1 page to 1 and 1/2 pages). I usually only put the full synopsis in the treatment. I'll customize the full synopsis for the written pitches so it'll sound more like a pitch than a synopsis.
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i always read plot synopses on wikipedia for movies i watch. they are great at synthesizing stories down to the core essence of what they're about. and a great example of what to focus on in a synopsis. reading a bunch of those will help in your quest. start with movies you like and watch this week. it's a great way to demystify what can often be a daunting process!