hello everyone I hope you're all good if anyone's interested in buying this screenplay please contact me.
https://www.moviebytes.com/ws/scriptDetail.cfm?ScriptID=13812
Your Stage : Satan's Town horror polished screenplay by Jamal Bokhammas
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If you don’t mind a little tough love, you need to pay attention to:
- Punctuation and run-on sentences.
- Screenplay formatting. Study screenplays, read a book on formatting. Use software that will center and tab your work correctly.
- Write your action lines in the present tense.
- Don’t use parentheticals until you know where they go. Then use them sparingly.
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Far from polished. Execution issues are only touched on by Mike. There are far more.
Instead of telling a story, the text describes a movie set to wall-to-wall music. There's a lack of flow because scenes are stacked.
If there's a lack of budget for buying screenwriting software, there is free: writersolo.com. At least start there.
thanks E Langley I appreciate it
thanks Mike Boas I appreciate it Mike Boas I have been reading books all my life.