I got my fourth feedback, and I want to say that I have now received the lowest score on my pitches, I re-wrote the pitch to make it more organized, but avail, received the lowest score.
I do not know how to revaluate my pitch if this second revaluation has failed while keeping the main idea
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Matthew Kelcourse this was a written pitch, so I submitted the two pages
Dan Guardino I know it won’t, I wanted to keep people updated and such.
Matthew Kelcourse no he’s asking why am I just keep posting my results
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Matthew Kelcourse - I agree with you completely. It takes 1000 no's to get your 1 yes. Along the way you need to get as much feedback as possible to make sure that your pitch is on point, your story is on point and you feel 100% confident going to market. I have been in buyers rooms where they pick apart EVERYTHING. You need to be prepared for all angles so when you are about to get your "yes" you are prepared. to answer - you don't want anything preventing you from your greenlight. I absolutely love your perspective. And, as for courage to do face to face, I highly recommend you join us in the Writers' Room - for those who are introverts or struggle without the computer as a shield it's a great place to get support to break you out of your shell during our pitch practice sessions. If you want a free month in the Writers' Room send me a DM here and I'll get you one. Would love to have you join us. And if anyone else is reading this and wants a free month, DM me. Would love to have you join us.
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Justin Groats - it's possible that something in the pitch didn't make sense or click to the person reading or hearing it. That's okay! You can think about how you pitched it that time and wonder if there was something you did differently that might have caused that confusion and start to hone in on that for the next time you pitch. Excited to see you keep making progress with it!
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I think there is always 2 sides of looking at things, Justin Groats you should definitely give yourself a pat on the back for the effort and ability to create something and process the feedback, that's a powerful skill to have. I remember being told early on in my career from a Manager who asked what my goals were, though I was a young doe-eyed graduate, they told me that I had a good head on my shoulders and would keep me going in the industry, that was something that stuck to me a lot. Keep going, you have something on your hands!
Dan Guardino wait it’s not?? so what’s with the script of more material requests for??
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Dan Guardino what do you mean by sell?
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I feel for you. My lowest scores came from my last pitch too - it was my first written submission as the calls were all taken. I had a 2 pages limit. It was not enough space and I cut out parts that were needed for better clarity. I am doing a TV series (fantasy) . I am trying to incorporate the new remarks into my Pitch. Written should be longer than 2 pages since we get 8 minutes to Pitch but it is what it is. Hang in there! Are there any consistent comments to fix? Start there maybe.
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Congratulations Justin Groats and my suggestion to you is to KEEP GLONG & KEEP WRITING BRO!!
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If you are not in the Writers´ Room here on Stage 32, please check it out and they will give you a free month to kick the tires and here you can pitch to many Producers looking for your art. Cheers!!