happy Labor Day weekend. I just finished my current screenplay "Brushstrokes of Redemption." I'd like to share the new poster art I created for the screenplay. Your thoughts will be greatly appreciated.
I like the poster, Luis A. Colon. Maybe make the title smaller. And the right side of the poster is wider than the left side. Maybe make each side the same size.
Also, I’m a Stage 32 Lounge Moderator. I wanted to let you know I moved your post from the Introduce Yourself Lounge to the Your Stage Lounge because it’s just promotion. You can include promotion in your introduction post, but you need to introduce/reintroduce yourself to the community. You could check out other posts in the Introduce Yourself Lounge to get ideas for your introduction post. Let me know if you have any questions.
Logline: A grief-stricken artist, drowning in loss and debt, is lured into the world of art forgery by an old friend. As he becomes entangled in a dangerous heist, he must decide between his survival and his soul, facing the ultimate test of redemption.
Synopsis: David Martinez, a once-celebrated painter, has lost everything—his wife, his daughter, and his passion. Struggling to pay mounting hospital bills and drowning in alcohol-fueled despair, he reunites with Rico, a childhood friend and ex-convict, who offers him a way out: forge a masterpiece in exchange for a life-changing payout.
Reluctant at first, David gives in to temptation, believing one job can fix everything. But as he paints his way into the criminal underworld, he discovers that Rico’s plan isn’t just about forgery—it’s about stealing the real masterpiece. As the heist unravels, betrayals surface, and David is forced to make an impossible choice: escape with the money and his life, or destroy the evidence and reclaim his integrity.
In a desperate moment of defiance, David sabotages the forgery, ensuring the heist’s failure. But redemption comes at a cost—he’s left alone to face the consequences of his actions, stripped of everything but his art and the faint hope of rebuilding his life.
I can feel the thriller, I can feel the inner struggles in the poster... Artwork is a very personal expression; today you like, tomorrow you feel like you need to change it. Nobody better than you to decide.
When I think of a poster, besides the elements I also pay attention to the title's style and font and to the overall coloring. I'm no expert though.
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I like the poster, Luis A. Colon. Maybe make the title smaller. And the right side of the poster is wider than the left side. Maybe make each side the same size.
Also, I’m a Stage 32 Lounge Moderator. I wanted to let you know I moved your post from the Introduce Yourself Lounge to the Your Stage Lounge because it’s just promotion. You can include promotion in your introduction post, but you need to introduce/reintroduce yourself to the community. You could check out other posts in the Introduce Yourself Lounge to get ideas for your introduction post. Let me know if you have any questions.
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LOOKS FIRE the font could be better and have more info
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Hope you just give idea.
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I would like to comment but... A logline and a synopsis would help. I always felt a poster as the visual logline.
Logline: A grief-stricken artist, drowning in loss and debt, is lured into the world of art forgery by an old friend. As he becomes entangled in a dangerous heist, he must decide between his survival and his soul, facing the ultimate test of redemption.
Synopsis: David Martinez, a once-celebrated painter, has lost everything—his wife, his daughter, and his passion. Struggling to pay mounting hospital bills and drowning in alcohol-fueled despair, he reunites with Rico, a childhood friend and ex-convict, who offers him a way out: forge a masterpiece in exchange for a life-changing payout.
Reluctant at first, David gives in to temptation, believing one job can fix everything. But as he paints his way into the criminal underworld, he discovers that Rico’s plan isn’t just about forgery—it’s about stealing the real masterpiece. As the heist unravels, betrayals surface, and David is forced to make an impossible choice: escape with the money and his life, or destroy the evidence and reclaim his integrity.
In a desperate moment of defiance, David sabotages the forgery, ensuring the heist’s failure. But redemption comes at a cost—he’s left alone to face the consequences of his actions, stripped of everything but his art and the faint hope of rebuilding his life.
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I can feel the thriller, I can feel the inner struggles in the poster... Artwork is a very personal expression; today you like, tomorrow you feel like you need to change it. Nobody better than you to decide.
When I think of a poster, besides the elements I also pay attention to the title's style and font and to the overall coloring. I'm no expert though.
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P. S. In my device, my photo is not so dark
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This is another poster for a different script