Hi everyone,
I’m excited to share the teaser for my feature film, "Triple Cross"—a tense thriller about a hitman, a gangster, and a sidekick trapped in a mysterious location, each fighting for survival.
Link to the teaser: https://youtu.be/d85hJuihPn8?si=s4jwxHK5mrEjTeOv
Watch with English Subtitles.
This low-budget, single-location film is now streaming on Tubi and Amazon US/UK. I’d love to hear your thoughts on the storyline, pacing, direction, and overall tension.
Feel free to share your feedback here or via direct message. Looking forward to your thoughts!
Thanks
Mirza Malik
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Looks cool. It reminds me of my first movie poster, The Killing Zone.
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The Killing Zone.
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Feedback -
Cover photo image should have just title (no names)
Trailer should tell us what the film is going to be about / draw viewers in. This is a handful of interesting shots, but no clue as to what the film is about. And the final shot firing gun, nobody would do that on a cell phone. If you've ever owned a gun or fired one, that would probably hurt your hears from the noise alone unless it was a .22.
Hope this helps!
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Stephen Folker thank you for the honest feedback. that's my first film will keep in mind those things. I am shooting my next film.
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Ian David Diaz Yeah it looks same different colors. what about the Teaser?
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Mirza, it looks intriguing, but the effects let it down. The muzzle shot looks like a fireworks display, and in the last shot, the bullet is in slow motion, but the guy isn't. It doesn't tell you what the story is all about, either. I hope I didn't piss you off. I'm just being honest.
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Mixed feelings for me. I liked the colors and intense feeling of the clip, but other than "kill or be killed," I really don't know what the story is about. The final line, "you don't have to worry," fell flat for me. I think because it was stating the obvious: of course you don't worry anymore once you're dead. Or maybe because I didn't see anything to indicate that the dead rise and continue to participate in the kill or be killed game, but now they lack fear. (Is that part of the story? The dead rise?)
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Sallie Olson thank you for the honest words. Yes it kill or to be killed type. the last line says you worry about death when you are alive, but once you are dead all the fear goes out of window. Not exactly dead rises type but yeah plot include something unusual.
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Ian David Diaz true, muzzel flash looks artificial.
Don't worry about me feeling not good. I need honest criticism on good and bad things which in turn will enable me to avoid those mistakes in next film.
Feel free to say whatever you feel. no offense