It’s first page Friday here in Japan, so I’m sharing the opening of my recent draft of HANA my crime thriller road movie! Logline reads: A bullied suburban housewife walks into the robbery of a loan shark and must evade both sides of the law to protect her family.
And yes, I’m opening with a montage and for the sake of an easy read I’ve taken some liberties with the sluglines.
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Hi, James Sutherland. I’m a Stage 32 Lounge Moderator. I wanted to let you know I moved your post from the Screenwriting Lounge to the Your Stage Lounge because it's promotion. Promotion can go in the Your Stage Lounge and on Your Wall.
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Hi Maurice Vaughan I apologize for that chief, I was unaware, I won’t do it again.