Hi. I’m a mostly-lurker member just trying to get the lay of the land. During my free time I write.
I just finished a TV pilot that I’d like to run by you. It’s a Horror/Action-Thriller called DEITY.
Logline: “After a rookie FBI agent miraculously heals from the mortal gunshot wounds inflicted by her murderous colleagues, she goes on the run while struggling to understand her emerging abilities.”
This pilot has old-school act-breaks (even though it's more for cable) and a cliffhanger ending.
I’ve run it by some screenwriting pros (coverage/notes) and got back a really, really mixed bag of comments. Made some revisions. Now ready for additional comments.
If you’ve got some time, please feel free to provide some commentary/opinions.
Here’s the pilot:
https://www.stage32.com/sites/stage32.com/files/assets/screenplay/175467...
Thanks,
Tom
